Notice how his chin doesn't stand out from the neck (fixed that with paint) and his left eye blends into the background. Not good.
I think that Aloysius looks sort of intellectual. Like he may have some wisdom to share. He also looks like he may need to be part of my Farkleberry series.
I think my next project may be to do the exact same design in bright colors. To show the difference - which I am guessing will be pretty significant. We will see..... barbara